In the sidebar of this blog (below David’s notes on what he reads), I try to capture the books I read and the movies I watch in a paragraph. I do it to both clarify and savor my experience, and possibly steer others toward (or away) from the work, and I try to do it without giving away plot, or raising hopes too high. I write before reading other criticism, reviews, or blurb so as not to be influenced, for others inevitably put things better than I do.
The last book I read was “My Name is Lucy Barton” by Elizabeth Strout, just out in paperback. What I said about it was: “Centered on a stay in a New York hospital, a woman relates incidents from her life. This novella is artfully artless, with an honesty that leads deep into human motivation and emotions, including the functions and dysfunctions of family, how we hurt ourselves and others, and the aching ecstasy that accompanies love. This is my second Elizabeth Strout, and it’s every bit as good as her ‘Olive Kitteridge.’” which I was satisfied more or less captured it. Then I read the review excerpts printed in the book. They are so superior to what I said that I’ll quote some of them here:
“unsparingly honest and forthright” (Chicago Tribune); “I was frequently put in mind of Hemingway’s famous injunction to write ‘the truest sentence that you know’” (The Wall Street Journal); “careful words and vibrating silences; a rare wealth of emotion” (The New York Times Book Review); “You think, that’s it. That’s what life is like.” (NPR); “attention to reality so exact that it goes beyond a skill and becomes a virtue” (Hilary Mantel).
How does Strout do it? She recently contributed to the Guardian's My Writing Day series, and I think there are clues there. For the honesty and attention to reality:
“Almost always I will start by writing a scene or a piece of a scene. I have learned over the years to take anything that is most pressing to me – it may be as mundane as a concern about upcoming dental work, or as serious as worrying about the safety of my child – and to transpose that emotion into a character. This will give the scene life, as opposed to having it wooden.”
And for the way Strout draws her readers in. This is less mentioned by reviewers: if you are being taken expertly through shimmering countryside, you are not aware of the vehicle.
“The actual writing of [the book or story] – deciding what the reader needs and when the reader needs it – is not as fun as writing the scenes; I feel less free, but there is a pleasure in drawing myself – and the reader – together this way. I always imagine an ideal reader: someone who is patient, but not too patient; someone who needs the book and wants to read it, but may not read it if I do not write it honestly. For me, it is a dance with the reader.”
In two books (three? I immediately read “Lucy Barton” a second time), Strout has become a favorite author.
--Julian